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It's very simplistic but the real issue is how short each conversation seems. No one seems to ever actually say anything at all and it's like a staccato trying to read through it. The writing style has also changed randomly more than once before going back to the standard. It's hard to relate to any of the characters because they seem to have no depth.
— Feb 01, 2024 10:40AM
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Arianna
is on page 86 of 182
Nite to author, if you're going to write about people from another country it is great if you research some coloquials. People from New York do not day "mum", and the characters so far from there I would say also don't have the correct manner of speaking. But then all of these characters mostly say one sentence at a time and stop so it's hard to tell.
— Feb 01, 2024 12:01PM
