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My own morbid curiosity has won this round and I'm reading this I guess, I thought maybe the second one would be better but so far the writing is still grating. Just one such example from the very beginning:
"..., worrying his right temple with the thumb he always worried his right temple with."
like really girl are you sure that's how we want to write this?
— Jan 31, 2024 05:11AM
"..., worrying his right temple with the thumb he always worried his right temple with."
like really girl are you sure that's how we want to write this?

