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Sabrina McEwan
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This is so bad. Like fifth grade reading level bad. I feel like I keep tripping over the extra redundant words, the cliches and immature phrasing, and "easy-peasy-Japaneasy"? Wtf is that? Yipee-yay?
— Oct 11, 2015 10:04PM
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Sabrina McEwan
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The writing is sort of awful. It really couldn't be any more awful, except that, I guess, it could. I really am hoping the story makes up for the terrible writing. So far it's not enough to distract me from the juvenile writing style.
— Oct 11, 2015 02:16PM
