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Holly
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The relationships are not very believable. Xiala senses Iktan is disappointed she doesn’t want to be friends, sees concern in xir eyes or whatever, but also xi is about to murder her maybe? This is absurd. Iktan is either a hardened killer or not. This in between is dumb.
— Feb 04, 2024 02:08PM
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Holly
is 47% done
Also one of the MCs is a mermaid, and her inner monologue is like 60% about being half mermaid (aka Teek), but we’ve barely seen her do anything.
Also if all Teek are women, how can she be half Teek. Wasn’t her mom also half Teek? And her grandmother Half Teek? I need more of this backstory here. How does the Teek blood not get bred out of them.
— Feb 03, 2024 07:17PM
Also if all Teek are women, how can she be half Teek. Wasn’t her mom also half Teek? And her grandmother Half Teek? I need more of this backstory here. How does the Teek blood not get bred out of them.
Holly
is 47% done
This whole time I’ve felt like I don’t understand enough of the history and lore of this world. What are the politics. Who are these clans and nations.
Now 47% of the way into book number 2, we get an explanation. I wish this happened early in book 1.
— Feb 03, 2024 07:12PM
Now 47% of the way into book number 2, we get an explanation. I wish this happened early in book 1.
