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The inciting incident that drew the main character into the novel was when he began searching for someone he lost. It lead him to many other places that tied into the story and caused many side-conflicts. It started with exposition on what happened before he left on the hunt and continued into rising action. These stories are still rather interesting, but it's getting very repetitive.
Oct 23, 2015 02:36PM
The Warlord of Mars (Barsoom, #3)


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