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Emelia
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I'm still trying. Another issue I'm having is that thoughts characters have aren't in quotes, so they're tough to follow.
Example: Frances always tells me that for someone who is so good at solving crimes I can't make it to the grocery store without getting lost, he thought. She’s right he thought. [P.60]
The rest of it is third person pov for this character so the sudden switch without the quotations is jarring.
— Feb 06, 2024 02:17AM
Example: Frances always tells me that for someone who is so good at solving crimes I can't make it to the grocery store without getting lost, he thought. She’s right he thought. [P.60]
The rest of it is third person pov for this character so the sudden switch without the quotations is jarring.
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Emelia
is on page 29 of 416
I'm struggling with this one. Only 26 pages in, and we keep switching from the past to the present to the future (but present) and from multiple POVs. For example, we suddenly shift from our main character to another woman, and that woman has a guest. Suddenly, out of nowhere, it's his POV. And multiple scenes will be both present and past tense.This is my second time reading these 29 pages because I was so confused.
— Feb 04, 2024 05:49PM
