Hugholine’s Reviews > Broken Dove > Status Update

I take back what I said about the calling of names. Stop the damned madness. I picture someone loudly calling out to someone every. single. time.

HOLD UP. Somebody just walked past some windows. He didn't walk passed: he walked PAST. And although names are still being called instead of said, it doesn't happen as often. As one of the heroes in these books would say, "This pleases me."

Sometimes I HATE the men in this world. She tried to talk to you, Apollo. You wouldn't listen.

I was about to comment on an error regarding pregnancy, but then I remembered that, in these books, a sonographer can miss twins on a mid-pregnancy scan. Was I actually expecting accuracy for a moment there? LOL, my bad.