Gina Lorax’s Reviews > Fire Daddies > Status Update

FMC is in big fire, gets knocked out by flaming debris, unconscious for days but gets released immediately with no recovery time or burns, apparently. Doesn’t ask to see her kids for days. Later, she’s in hospital again, unconscious for days (again), released as soon as she wakes up. Ridiculous. All of it.
Multiple times a scene is written twice & both versions left in book.
Sex scenes were rushed & meh.