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Damaged142
is 25% done
The first ~140 pages were great, honestly, probably the best I've seen from this series since the first 4 books. But God, I HATE when it switches to the "Peep" governments perspective. When it does its just exposition upon exposition upon exposition. It's exhausting and very boring to read. It's been an issue the whole series, but it just keeps getting worse.
— Feb 20, 2024 03:15PM
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Damaged142
is 81% done
There are a number of different continuity errors in this book. Wrong system names when talking about past events, it being explained that peep missle pods hold 12 missiles, when it's already known that they hold 16.
And while not technically an error, saying the allied barrage held over 3000 missiles with almost 70 of the wall + pods, is a gross miscalculation. A smaller fleet in the past put out 13k with pods
— Feb 26, 2024 12:56AM
And while not technically an error, saying the allied barrage held over 3000 missiles with almost 70 of the wall + pods, is a gross miscalculation. A smaller fleet in the past put out 13k with pods
Damaged142
is 60% done
I really am struggling to finish this... what happened to all the character interaction? I'm talking multiple pages worth of exposition between 2 characters' sentences
Granted, its been a problem for the entire series, but the closer we get to the end, the more exposition we get dumped on us. I'm sorry, as cool as it is the story doesn't need 4 pages detailing the small differences between LACs, thats just 1 example
— Feb 23, 2024 11:26PM
Granted, its been a problem for the entire series, but the closer we get to the end, the more exposition we get dumped on us. I'm sorry, as cool as it is the story doesn't need 4 pages detailing the small differences between LACs, thats just 1 example
