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Bonnabelle
is 24% done
*spoilers* ah yes, the very first depiction of sex in this novel. I didn’t know that’s what would be included but nonetheless I’m not surprised. Extremely tame, very brief. The style of writing is difficult for me to focus on. A few attempts at humor have been made and only one has landed so far. Still too soon to have strong opinions on.
— Feb 27, 2024 11:01AM
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Bonnabelle
is on page 111 of 333
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Ok she’s really mentally ill, awesome! Hopelessly obsessed with her husband who is having a pretty normal reaction to twin daughters coming into their lives. She’s desperate to abort them so the attention he’s giving to them can be redirected to her. She’s twisted and I’m sure that will come to light the further we go- I have theories of what tragedies have befallen her family to this point.
— Feb 27, 2024 12:18PM
Ok she’s really mentally ill, awesome! Hopelessly obsessed with her husband who is having a pretty normal reaction to twin daughters coming into their lives. She’s desperate to abort them so the attention he’s giving to them can be redirected to her. She’s twisted and I’m sure that will come to light the further we go- I have theories of what tragedies have befallen her family to this point.
Bonnabelle
is 11% done
Finding myself shocked at the writing style. Similar to the novel I wrote at 14, there’s far too many “I” statements and the speed at which topics change is jolting. The main character is extremely anxious and mildly paranoid.
— Feb 27, 2024 08:56AM