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Elaine White
is 35% done
Right...so, there is a reason that authors have beta readers, alpha readers and editors, and this book is the reason.
There is some GREAT potential in the story. But the constant referral of characters as "the blond", "the raven" is wearing on me. People are more than just their appearances, and since they have names...why not use them? It is an interesting story, but so far lacking depth.
— Mar 02, 2024 05:02AM
There is some GREAT potential in the story. But the constant referral of characters as "the blond", "the raven" is wearing on me. People are more than just their appearances, and since they have names...why not use them? It is an interesting story, but so far lacking depth.
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Elaine White
is 90% done
I feel like the last 30% is the only plot exploration and character growth in the entire book, but it's also where I feel less engaged with the story and the characters. They've both done a sudden 180 flip that doesn't really make much sense. I also feel like there's been an attempt to include as many kinks as possible into one book and Barnaby going from virgin to kinky deer was too easy...
— Mar 03, 2024 04:27AM
