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Despite there being half a dozen inconsistencies In the plot (ie a group of Hunter's were lamenting to each other That there was no prey to be had, while six pages laved off our protagonist is looking over a massive herd of deer) and also some inconsistencies in character behaviour I will see this one through to the end. Probably heading toward a three star review Let's go
Mar 03, 2024 04:35PM
The Dawning: 31,000 BC

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