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Dunno about this one. When writing a prequel, please remember to keep your timelines straight. Next thing: holy exposition, Batman! Cross may have lost me with Griffin's back story: all told in 1-2 pages of exposition that strained my suspension of disbelief.
— Nov 11, 2015 07:40AM
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