Rachel’s Reviews > Hell's Half-Acre: A Novel > Status Update
Rachel
is 80% done
this story has enough holes to compete with a block of Swiss cheese.
— Nov 11, 2015 10:34PM
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Rachel
is 35% done
A little verbose, and missing out on a lot of chances to develop characters through dialogue
— Nov 05, 2015 08:49PM
