Kelly Young’s Reviews > Spell of the Ball > Status Update
Kelly Young
is 75% done
This is very sloppily edited. The very first introduction to the very first story uses the word 'their' instead of 'they're'. It just gets worse from there. Missing words, verb tense mistakes and grammar flubs abound. One story is so poorly written I couldn't bear to read it. I'm frankly shocked, as these writers are better than this. It's as though this was a high school writing assignment published without checking
— Nov 13, 2015 01:50PM
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