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Apotheosis Clouding
is 46% done
Honestly thought Layla leaving would leave a heavier impact on Kerym and that he'd maybe attempt to force the information out of her cousin, Amara, but the fact she didn't say anything other than the silly words of "you don't need to know if she didn't tell you".
The time skip could have used a lot of working with. It would have been nice to figure out how Layla met Harper and Olias, and other members.
— Mar 13, 2024 12:03PM
The time skip could have used a lot of working with. It would have been nice to figure out how Layla met Harper and Olias, and other members.
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Apotheosis Clouding
is 76% done
The constant back and forth with Layla and Kerym is honestly boring and overused at this point. They keep second-guessing each other's ulterior motives, barely had enough time to get back into a feel of things before Kerym leaves, then they both start loathing on each other top the max before breaking down almost every other chapter for the whole book so far.
— Mar 26, 2024 11:49AM
Apotheosis Clouding
is 10% done
The information dump from the first couple chapters is bland and nothing of true note, but it is fairly a lot of information to take in with a whole bunch of names being thrown around. It's not too over the top, though.
The world building--so far- it doesn't explain if they're on a whole different planet or whatever it is. The building is very vague aside from the basics.
— Mar 12, 2024 04:33PM
The world building--so far- it doesn't explain if they're on a whole different planet or whatever it is. The building is very vague aside from the basics.
