Staci Corcoran’s Reviews > Video Game Plotline Tester > Status Update
Staci Corcoran
is 66% done
Yeah, the dialogue is still terrible, took me a while to figure out why it sounded familiar, it’s really like badly translated anime. Also, there’s basically no overarching plot. “I want to give a better life to my disabled little sister” is not a plot. I will finish it, but I don’t think I will be going on to the sequel.
— Mar 14, 2024 07:30PM
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Staci Corcoran
is 30% done
The dialogue is so stilted. It’s hard to believe the person who wrote this has ever had a real conversation. Wow.
— Mar 14, 2024 10:11AM
