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Sharon
is on page 168 of 418
It's, like, not BAD necessarily but it's a bit juvenile. I can see elements of my OG serial killer novel that I started in high school and the sci-fi assassin book that I wrote when I was 15, so I know where the author is coming from. But it could DEFINITELY use some polishing and reformatting because there are a lot of typos.
I don't think there's a full grasp on when to use a comma vs period after quotation marks.
— Mar 15, 2024 06:08PM
I don't think there's a full grasp on when to use a comma vs period after quotation marks.
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Sharon
is on page 417 of 418
Review TK but positing ingrained religious bigotry from trauma as equal to murdering 600 people? I don't think so babe.
— Mar 16, 2024 02:08PM
Sharon
is on page 299 of 418
Genuinely, the absolute LEAST important part of this book is Wolf being a serial killer. Literally everything would be the same if he wasn't lmao
— Mar 16, 2024 01:21PM
Sharon
is on page 205 of 418
Rudo???? Is nonbinary???? But they say things??? Like??? That?????
HUH?
— Mar 16, 2024 12:22PM
HUH?
Sharon
is on page 124 of 418
Wolfgang Ethos with his brothers Foxglove Pathos and Bearclaw Logos 💀
(Sorry that's kinda mean but it's all I've been thinking about since we learned his last name lol)
— Mar 15, 2024 01:57PM
(Sorry that's kinda mean but it's all I've been thinking about since we learned his last name lol)
Sharon
is on page 78 of 418
Darling, there are 52 weeks in a year, not 58 💀💀💀
— Mar 15, 2024 10:01AM
Sharon
is on page 6 of 418
I'm starting a new book for the bus because genuinely I don't want to read any of the books I'm physically reading rn help me lmao
— Mar 14, 2024 08:41PM
