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So her mind is "foggy and uncouth" and she can't remember why she's there, but her facilities are sharp enough to notice a mournful glint in the goddesses eyes.
— Mar 16, 2024 08:11AM
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Casey
is on page 239 of 304
The characters keep warping their feelings from one scene to the next. Last chapter ended with Madea being a hermit and going mad due to Jason being away during the day. Start of the next chapter she is dismayed at the thought of leaving the town for another. It just doesn't make sense.
— Mar 19, 2024 02:42PM
Casey
is on page 226 of 304
"In the heart of the space was an outdoor courtyard, complete with a fountain fed by one of Korinth's many natural springs and carefully kept herbs."
The fountain is fed by herbs? The grammar is getting worse.
— Mar 19, 2024 02:31PM
The fountain is fed by herbs? The grammar is getting worse.
Casey
is on page 226 of 304
"...the elegant lines of her profile ensnared me immediately". Odd way to describe your newborn baby
— Mar 19, 2024 02:15PM
Casey
is on page 224 of 304
Another word repeated twice in a sentence. 'Simply'
— Mar 19, 2024 02:10PM
Casey
is on page 218 of 304
I doubt his throat would have enough for a "shower of blood" after being cut 9 times already.
— Mar 18, 2024 02:56PM
Casey
is on page 146 of 304
There's no mention of cleaning out her experiments from her labor anything... won't they be discovered? Then her father will know what she did?
— Mar 17, 2024 08:25AM
Casey
is on page 129 of 304
"I recruited Herakles... along with his boy lover, Halas. Orpheus too offered to join..."
Excuse me? I'm all for Hercules being bisexuality, but the mention here feels out of place.
— Mar 16, 2024 09:02AM
Excuse me? I'm all for Hercules being bisexuality, but the mention here feels out of place.

