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How come a firs person narration could be so ... impersonal ... clinical... when they're getting it on?
— Nov 23, 2015 06:37AM
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I still need to get used to the first person narration. Most of the time its ok, but sometimes the narrator is too close to stating facts, not beliefs - as he should do, which feels artificial.
— Nov 22, 2015 11:16PM
