Addie O'Connell’s Reviews > Keep It in the Family > Status Update

Odd. I do not like that each chapter rotates between 5 people. The writing isn’t whimsical at all. It is bland, much like a middle school elementary paper, if not worse. The writing from the protagonist point of view could be done better as well. The idea of preying on children to murder them is unsettling, and somehow boring here. This could end up on the DNF list.