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Cfabrication
is 22% done
The description of “the intruder” on the ships is a bit underdeveloped.
Maybe it’s a juxtaposition effect, coming right after a scene between Tarquin and Naira that was straight out of a Regency romance between the viscount and the gentlewoman masquerading as a chambermaid.
— Mar 26, 2024 02:39PM
Maybe it’s a juxtaposition effect, coming right after a scene between Tarquin and Naira that was straight out of a Regency romance between the viscount and the gentlewoman masquerading as a chambermaid.
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Cfabrication
is 75% done
I have mixed feelings about the ages. Tarquin doesn’t act like what I think of as a 35-year old. But that’s in a world where that’s over a third of a life. In a world where people are in their middle age at 70, 35 is quite young.
I think that could have been a bit more explicit, though.
I am totally not sold on the romance.
— Mar 31, 2024 02:14PM
I think that could have been a bit more explicit, though.
I am totally not sold on the romance.
Cfabrication
is 20% done
A little unbalanced. The "my liege" plus corporations isn’t totally convincing. Also, the narrator has chosen an odd, gruff, sort of NYC accent that makes the woman protagonist (can’t remember her name, starts with N) sound like a sixty year old man. His native accent seems to be posh UK.
— Mar 26, 2024 12:15PM
