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“The zenith of her head barely grazing the circumference of the plague doctor’s shoulder”.
On its own — a little labored, too interested in the vocabulary — but fine.
In the sea of other sentences like this? I keep getting tugged out of the narrative, keep getting told “hey hey LOOK AT THIS PHRASE”. I’m struggling.
— Mar 26, 2024 06:16PM
On its own — a little labored, too interested in the vocabulary — but fine.
In the sea of other sentences like this? I keep getting tugged out of the narrative, keep getting told “hey hey LOOK AT THIS PHRASE”. I’m struggling.
