Red Urchin’s Reviews > A Midnight Dance > Status Update
Red Urchin
is 49% done
Tupping... to many modifiers ... tupping again ... blahblah with too many superlatives ... now tupping... cheesy dialogue ... ridiculous plot ... are these rabbits?
— Dec 10, 2015 12:46PM
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Red Urchin
is 19% done
Writing still yuck... and a lengthy tupping scene already that made me wonder about the explosiveness of a certain body part...
— Dec 10, 2015 06:22AM
