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is 17% done
Nope. Done. Too instead of to. Added to the other things wrong and now a whole paragraph that'd been rewritten and should have obviously been deleted yet here it is.... Ugh! Life's too short and I have many more books to choose from. DNF!
— Dec 12, 2015 01:40PM
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Pati
is 13% done
Definitely needs a good proofreading... Already caught a slip of POV.... Suddenly I instead of he.... And oddly worded. I'm sorry but if you're talking to your cousin about her parents you'd say.... Your mom not 'my aunt' and your dad NOT. 'my uncle' and he wouldn't have to tell her things about their mom's shared childhood. *sigh*
— Dec 12, 2015 12:37PM
