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Dylan
is 43% done
This book needs a better editor, it reads like an unfinished draft. Too much tedium and minutiae, way too much recap and can we please get rid of Keith already?
— Apr 08, 2024 07:20AM
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Dylan
is 37% done
Fuck Megan, all my homies hate Megan. She does not vibe at all with Amber and Amber should have fired her several books ago. Her job is to make Amber's life easier, instead she keeps causing problems. This is once again Amber waiting far too long to fire people that do a shit job.
— Apr 03, 2024 04:30PM
Dylan
is 35% done
Amber needs to tell Lucas about Keith. Screw the "good manners"! And the hive doesn't need Keith, the hive needs to get rid of Keith. Allowing a psychopath to be hive telepath is irresponsible af, this guy could destroy the hive whenever he feels like it. It's not worth the risks to keep him around, he needs to be removed from power.
— Nov 30, 2023 05:38AM
