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is 88% done
As I’ve progressed further in the book I can still tell that there is a lack of depth in a lot of the source material. For example, who is this evil crown prince? They could’ve provided more background on who he is in relation to the three king/queens. Instead what? Towards the end, Erec Rex is just shoved into a room with him. This rando who abuses power and wants to murder him. Like context would’ve helped.
— Apr 10, 2024 10:15PM
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Keag
is 36% done
I remember reading this book back in school and having a really good impression of it. But going back to it now, I’m finding that it is full of awkward bumps in the journey. Eric’s sudden outbursts at his mom. The narration just isn’t smooth. And neither are the transitions.
— Apr 08, 2024 11:33PM
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Apr 10, 2024 10:30PM
Ok update on this, I think there was a brief context description of who the crown prince was. But it came about in a very abrupt manner. So the writing isn’t smooth, transition of details aren’t smooth either. And neither was the confrontation scene between crown prince and erec.
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