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Jay
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Character descriptions are subpar. The black woman was describing as “black woman with lipstick and pearls wearing a stylish business suit”. It leaves room for interpretation but infuriating for the ones that like a whole picture while reading.
I am aware the author released a prequel to this book but it feels like the chemistry for two people who haven’t seen each other but for one night had zero build up.
— Apr 11, 2024 09:03PM
I am aware the author released a prequel to this book but it feels like the chemistry for two people who haven’t seen each other but for one night had zero build up.
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Jay
is on page 305 of 594
Ehh spicy scenes are getting better but still missing the personal feeling touch. I wouldn’t say Jake is a simp but kind of clingy
— Apr 16, 2024 09:24PM
Jay
is on page 179 of 594
It’s could go either way right now😒 the trio fell flat for me because her feelings of the experience was not deep but was still a good experience.
— Apr 14, 2024 07:44PM
Jay
is on page 119 of 594
TWENTY-SIX CHAPTERS and I now know more about Rachael than just the sleeve of tats, septum piercing, average boobs, and possibly black hair!
— Apr 14, 2024 04:46PM

