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Rachael is kind of manipulative…

Ehh spicy scenes are getting better but still missing the personal feeling touch. I wouldn’t say Jake is a simp but kind of clingy

It’s could go either way right now😒 the trio fell flat for me because her feelings of the experience was not deep but was still a good experience.

TWENTY-SIX CHAPTERS and I now know more about Rachael than just the sleeve of tats, septum piercing, average boobs, and possibly black hair!

Character descriptions are subpar. The black woman was describing as “black woman with lipstick and pearls wearing a stylish business suit”. It leaves room for interpretation but infuriating for the ones that like a whole picture while reading.

I am aware the author released a prequel to this book but it feels like the chemistry for two people who haven’t seen each other but for one night had zero build up.