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Erin
is 3% done
First impressions: First person present tense sets us up for fast pace. Lots of simple sentences most of them starting with "I" . Two different points of view and both use first person. Don't feel a distinction between the characters. Don't know what they look like. By second elsa chapter start to get a little more description. This helps it flow better.
— Apr 16, 2024 10:10AM
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