Shenanigans’s Reviews > No Longer a Gentleman > Status Update

I just wanna finish this so I don't have to wonder how stupid the ending was. Though her overuse of exclamation points is grating .

The words are telling me that these characters are upset but the sequence of events and how they are relayed to me, the reader, doesn't match up. They seem to be flying off the handle mad at the drop of a hat.

This is ... poorly written.

I dunno why I'm still reading this

I take that back. It's not just Cassie and Grey. It's the way everyone talks to each other. Rob was mad and insulting Cassie after finding out she boned Grey then not even a page later he's feeling sorry for him and hugging her out of a pity. Im gonna get whiplash from these characters.

Its so unserious.

The way Grey and Cassie talk to each other while undressing is nauseating. These two couldnt have less chemistry if they tried.

There's very little happening on the pages. Cassie and Grey became VERY friendly, very quickly. I dont like it. I've been skimming the pages just to see what happens next

This reads very....drab. As if the author didn't really want to write it. There's no excitement. Its all very staccato.