Lindsey Bernard’s Reviews > If You Dare > Status Update

I'm excited to read another Kresley Cole book... But I've stumbled across a few editing moments. Since when do you have conversational quotes that don't start a new paragraph with the next speaker's thoughts?

Person #1: "blah, blah, blah."

Person #2: "blah, blah, blah."


(Not) Person #1: "blah, blah, blah" (person #2) "blah, blah, blah".

Very confusing.