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Yay, story's picking up again. :) Infodumps have their place, but pacing matters more than notecards.
Dec 24, 2015 01:27PM
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Sarah Mac
Sarah Mac is on page 326 of 444
It's okay...but not much plot. That makes me sad, because the characters are pretty decent & deserve a more vibrant story. When stuff actually happens, it's a good book; when things slow down, it drags.
Dec 24, 2015 12:36AM
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Sarah Mac
Sarah Mac is on page 185 of 444
'Smiling in the dark hallway, Ki-Inanna spoke once more in her mind, her lips still but her heart beating fast: I will win you, Daman. I will use my skills & win you, & you will know, as I do, the touch of the goddess, & of fate.'
Dec 21, 2015 08:29PM
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Sarah Mac
Sarah Mac is on page 148 of 444
'Hammurabi absently twisted the ends of his mustache into a point as he said, "You might both have stepped from the tales of Gilgamesh."' ....So. Hammurabi makes a cameo to reference Gilgamesh in a 70s romance novel. Methinks the author was totally trolling her readers. :D
Dec 19, 2015 10:28PM
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Sarah Mac
Sarah Mac is on page 107 of 444
'A man's moment of passion gave up his seed & then, no matter how faithful his devotion to she who was his wife, woman's fate was her own.' ....And yet males think so highly of their peens. Pfft. ;)
Dec 19, 2015 03:02PM
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Sarah Mac
Sarah Mac is on page 54 of 444
'She could not wish it away. It had not been a dream. The strong drugs had offended her brain & belly, & did so still, but reality lay in the hard surface of the parapet & in the growing aches & stiffness of her body, tangible reminders of what she had suffered.'
Dec 17, 2015 10:49PM
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Sarah Mac is on page 15 of 444
'Who might know the will of the Divine Ones? Like children's playthings, mortals could be shattered & blown away in a cruel wind & lost forever in these games of the gods. No man or woman had the power to rule destiny.'
Dec 17, 2015 09:12PM
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