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The fantasy world and descriptions are nice, but there’s a heavy lean on proper nouns that we don’t know what they mean, and not enough explanation. I hate guessing what things mean, and since the story is titled after Nightfall, it would be nice to have it explained as soon as possible. It hasn’t been yet. The prose is also PURPLE and overdone. Author is lovely though, excited to keep reading! Excellent cover!
Apr 24, 2024 11:19AM
A Song For Nightfall

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