Carina’s Reviews > Moon Shadow > Status Update

At least the chapters are short

Omg the writing is terrible. Terrible! I probably still wouldn’t love it if it were better written but I’d be more likely to actually be interested. It really feels like a 15 year old’s Nanowrimo project. It could be a first draft but WHERE IS YOUR EDITOR? How are you selling books? At this pt I’m hate reading the remainder for book club.

Not really my style of writing but I’m in it for the long haul for one of my book clubs. Honestly it could be good with a good editor.