Ambie’s Reviews > Daphne > Status Update
Ambie
is 47% done
Not even halfway, and it's so repetitive.
Malerman also makes some writing choices that irritate me, like tacking on "she knows" to the end of so many sentences. It doesn't add to characterization. It comes across as poor editing and/or pretentious.
— Apr 29, 2024 07:47AM
Malerman also makes some writing choices that irritate me, like tacking on "she knows" to the end of so many sentences. It doesn't add to characterization. It comes across as poor editing and/or pretentious.
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Ambie
is 62% done
Kit's journal entries are not profound, they're annoying dribble (lol) that look a lot like filler.
— Apr 29, 2024 09:45AM
