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Dakota
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Okay he finally stood up to his dad a bit. But what things do these scenes add? Rod gets a small mental health break and we learn some Ilia/Leono backstory? Okay. Its so dragged out. Says so much and nothing at all. Also PLEASE learn how to write about POC it feels so yucky. You don’t need to remind me every other line about her that shes brown and looks NOT trans passing.
— Apr 30, 2024 01:52PM
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Dakota
is on page 419 of 430
He becomes a doctor, helps kids, gets his dream place with his dream man, his dad is in AA, and Marty is graduating. But one client kid is dreaming of Feyd… dundundun! Fr tho clear DID metaphors again why did you make it all literal
— May 05, 2024 02:10PM
Dakota
is on page 417 of 430
Also, I know Jane is named after his bio mom and thats why he talks to it, but thats never said in the book. Only online. So it comes off strange
— May 05, 2024 01:53PM
Dakota
is on page 417 of 430
Again, cool DID metaphor and conclusion. Wicker sleeps inside. His domain and kingdom
is yours. Sick! But it was all literal instead.
— May 05, 2024 01:51PM
is yours. Sick! But it was all literal instead.
Dakota
is on page 392 of 430
The Wicker Man has been possessing Tom
the whole time. Explains his lack of changed behavior, but not Rods?
— May 05, 2024 04:52AM
the whole time. Explains his lack of changed behavior, but not Rods?
Dakota
is on page 383 of 430
I do like the actual scary scenes. So cool in concept.
— May 05, 2024 04:35AM
Dakota
is on page 373 of 430
Phasing is easier. Phasing during daytime. Most intense times after Dads worst outbursts. All about DID and switching and flashbacks. They mentioned they had it worst at night
— May 05, 2024 04:25AM
Dakota
is on page 369 of 430
Sometimes they describe whats happening before the where. Like they said Ilia got opened the doors… to what? A car, yes bc they’re in a parking lot but. Okay.
— May 05, 2024 04:04AM
