Jenna’s Reviews > Locked Inside > Status Update

I think this would've worked better as a novella. The "I'm in love with you but I can't tell you" dance is just being stretched unbelievably thin. Three words could've ended this book at page 60. Or page 80. Or page 100. Or page 120. Locked-in syndrome hasn't played much of a role in the story past the first third. It's just a traditional poor-communication romance at this point.

My brilliant partner got my laptop and phone set up with TTS, so this is happening. I like the premise of this book, but the writing itself has been iffy. Some cultural stereotypes, lots of contrivances. Basically, 100+ pages so far of the leads not communicating their feelings. Round and round in circles. Frustrating.