Bianca’s Reviews > Heir of Flames: Book 1 of the Cartel Elements Series > Status Update

So far, what agitates me is that the author could've combined some of these sentences and also some word choices that are either incorrect or just not right. For example, if a woman you're attracted to is all you dream about, you shouldn't say she contaminated your dreams because that verbiage is very negative. There are better, more complimentary words that could've been used.