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Misty Loreen is 40% done
I wanted to push through and finish this book. But my desire to read dies when I start to read.
The authors inability to play dumb and the need to overcompensate with being smart by interjecting big words feels forced. Often, the plot armor for S.T.'s intelligence is thin at best, covering over a lack of character development off the page.
The storyline is meandering and pointless. It wanders in aimless direction.
May 26, 2024 04:58PM
Hollow Kingdom (Hollow Kingdom #1)

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