Ruby’s Reviews > A Fragile Enchantment > Status Update

- I've reached the point where they've come together but it's not making sense
- they've spent the whole book hating each other and have had one brief moment on a balcony where they barely spoke and another when they did have a meaningful interaction
- but where is the build up showing they've grown closer over time
- it's very sudden and isn't clicking for me and doesn't feel believable
- maybe if we had a Kit POV