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is on page 220 of 373
- the political intrigue aspects are the most appealing parts of the book
- plot twists and family dynamics are adding a lot to what's happening and why certain situations are happening and I wish we got more of this throughout the book
- the romance elements have been the least interesting plot points
— May 26, 2024 10:19PM
- plot twists and family dynamics are adding a lot to what's happening and why certain situations are happening and I wish we got more of this throughout the book
- the romance elements have been the least interesting plot points
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Ruby
is on page 200 of 373
- I've reached the point where they've come together but it's not making sense
- they've spent the whole book hating each other and have had one brief moment on a balcony where they barely spoke and another when they did have a meaningful interaction
- but where is the build up showing they've grown closer over time
- it's very sudden and isn't clicking for me and doesn't feel believable
- maybe if we had a Kit POV
— May 26, 2024 08:44PM
- they've spent the whole book hating each other and have had one brief moment on a balcony where they barely spoke and another when they did have a meaningful interaction
- but where is the build up showing they've grown closer over time
- it's very sudden and isn't clicking for me and doesn't feel believable
- maybe if we had a Kit POV