Joe’s Reviews > Garden of Eden: The Rise, Pursuit, and Sanctuary of Eden > Status Update
Joe
is 50% done
This book is in need of a good editor, there are some very repetitive sections, the pacing is erratic and some section make no sense. The system has full access to the internet and has to ask what dancing is and if a coffee mug gets warm. Explanation of feelings is with other feelings they would not know and did not explain how he could talk to the system in public and not look like a lunatic talking to themselves.
— May 26, 2024 09:35PM
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