Dobby’s Reviews > The Apple Orchard > Status Update

I like recipes in cookbooks, not in novels. Sentence1: bees hovering over bushels of harvested fruit. Sentence2: Trees...waiting for harvest workers to arrive. Pulled out of the story by the second sentence. Pg70: powdered donut immediately prior to critical meeting? Pg 112: pilot to passenger "Down there on your left..." umm...would be the floor of the cockpit? Is there an editor in the house??