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1. Why dual POVs with third person limited? Why not just do third omniscient? I'm SO hung up on this.
2. You can't tell me that these characters are enamored with each other and then not give me any reason why (other than physical attraction) these characters like each other. As it stands, Sybil sees Esme as a resource n Esme seems to be annoyed with Sybil a lot of the time. Like.
— Jun 01, 2024 11:36AM
2. You can't tell me that these characters are enamored with each other and then not give me any reason why (other than physical attraction) these characters like each other. As it stands, Sybil sees Esme as a resource n Esme seems to be annoyed with Sybil a lot of the time. Like.
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