Kevin’s Reviews > Peter Huddleston & The Rites of Passage > Status Update

The plot is beginning to unfold. As others have noted, there are some strange typos in this copy, such as a sentence stopping and continuing on a new line. I'm also not a fan of the use of capital letters to denote noise or emotion. I think using language to describe this is more effective and less jarring for the reader.

Somewhere around here. A quick read so far.