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The author should have created more depth and history between Elspeth and Rayvn. Apparently they have been aware of each other since childhood so why isn't there more mention of how they grew up together? It would have been much more intriguing to think that they had been good childhood friends (or enemies) only to have thay relationship deepen/change as adults.
— Jun 07, 2024 07:23AM
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❀Summer❀
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Also, why did the author neglect the opprotunity, nay, the duty, to explain what fate befalls those with the infection. She should have gripped us with terror over the true role of a destrier. She should have made us feel the same terror infected one feel by showing what it's like to be hunted or killed or tortured and she should have done it with creativity. Don't spare me the details. Now I'm just bored.
— Jun 07, 2024 07:27AM
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Meh, it's good enough to keep reading but the way this author tried (and failed) to set up an enemies to lovers situation has really put me off. It wasn't well developed or convincing. The overall plot though is pretty original and I'm curious to see where it goes.
— Jun 06, 2024 05:50AM
