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Mrs REM
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Also, how many times does it need to be said that he is a billionaire cowboy. Got it. Thanks.
And are they in their late 30s/early 40s? Because the giggling and the simplistic “thoughts” and conversations seem more like a couple of teens.
Not to mention the fascination with dogs. Will there be a storyline any time soon?
— Jun 13, 2024 02:11PM
And are they in their late 30s/early 40s? Because the giggling and the simplistic “thoughts” and conversations seem more like a couple of teens.
Not to mention the fascination with dogs. Will there be a storyline any time soon?
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Mrs REM
is on page 160 of 278
I am really struggling to keep reading this
Poorly written and no real plot
I think there are only 100 pages left so I’m going to finish but it really is dire!
— Jun 14, 2024 01:54AM
Poorly written and no real plot
I think there are only 100 pages left so I’m going to finish but it really is dire!
Mrs REM
is on page 117 of 278
Well, this is a bit of a slog.
Lost count of the number of uses of “said” in one chapter. Many other very simplistic sentences and phrases which make it all feel like it’s been written by a school kid.
I’m persevering because I don’t like to leave something unfinished.
The romance is a bit weird. The first kiss came from nowhere then they haven’t kissed again since. Do they know each other or not?
— Jun 13, 2024 02:08PM
Lost count of the number of uses of “said” in one chapter. Many other very simplistic sentences and phrases which make it all feel like it’s been written by a school kid.
I’m persevering because I don’t like to leave something unfinished.
The romance is a bit weird. The first kiss came from nowhere then they haven’t kissed again since. Do they know each other or not?
Mrs REM
is on page 37 of 278
New author for me
Already found 2 typos
Struggling to read some bits
Also, some things are clumsy in the way they’ve been written
The first kiss was bizarre and out of nowhere.
I’m forging on to see what it’s like.
— Jun 12, 2024 02:09PM
Already found 2 typos
Struggling to read some bits
Also, some things are clumsy in the way they’ve been written
The first kiss was bizarre and out of nowhere.
I’m forging on to see what it’s like.
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Jun 13, 2024 02:22PM
Not to mention the persistent use of “boyfriend” “girlfriend” “relationship” … becoming annoying
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