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And then the bad guys stand and give away the whole scheme to Mary Sue *cough* Tiber.

Tiber has an attack of the Mary Sue's. He's got to throw a punch but is more about being slender toned sinking onto Gabriel's arms. His empathy has convenient flashes.

Now Duke the dog shows psychic tracking abilities. There's being a smart dog, being a good tracker, then there's this baloney.

This has been good but it's hit silliness, I'd like to see the Sheriff discover something, or appoint the dog!

Feel more involved in this than the previous book.
I figure hound of the baskerviles was a clue but the details aren't obvious.