Isabeau’s Reviews > Bunny Finds a Friend > Status Update

So far the writing gets a B/B+ ... In addition to the comma thing, there are a couple of typos (an It for I, and desert for dessert) and a few words that feel off in usage (where it jarred me out of the story even though I knew what the author was going for). But the story is good, and the sort of light-hearted fluff that I desperately wanted after the depressing melancholy of the last book I read.

First page reaction: good humor, but abundance of commas (which is an unusual thing for me to be bothered by as I prefer that to a dearth of commas). Gut reaction is that this will be a fun read.